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Feedback Sandwich


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Gimme gimme gimme some feedback (some feedback)

Gimme gimme gimme some feedback (some feedback)

Now hop to your right (Some feedback)

Now hop to your left (Some feedback)

Give someone a high five (some feedback)

Gimme gimme gimme some feedback 

 

Feedback is like a sandwich. Start with something positive,

something constructive in the middle, it’s tasty.

End with something positive (End with something positive.)

 

Feedback is like a sandwich. Start with something positive,

something constructive in the middle, it’s tasty.

End with something positive (End with something positive.)

 

Chorus

 

Feedback is like a sandwich. Start with something positive,

something constructive in the middle, it’s tasty.

End with something positive (End with something positive.)

 

Feedback is like a sandwich. Start with something positive,

something constructive in the middle, it’s tasty.

End with something positive (End with something positive.)

 

Gimme gimme gimme some feedback.

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Punctuate Dialogue


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Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

 

I can never remember how to punctuate my dialogue correctly.

I can never remember how to punctuate my dialogue correctly.

 

Comma comes first (Comma comes first)

Quotation mark (Quotation mark)

Insert dialogue, then punctuate

With a period, with a question mark, exclamation mark,

end quotation mark,

to remember, sing:

 

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

 

I can never remember how to punctuate my dialogue correctly.

I can never remember how to punctuate my dialogue correctly.

 

Comma comes first (Comma comes first)

Quotation mark (Quotation mark)

Insert dialogue, then punctuate

With a period, with a question mark, exclamation mark,

end quotation mark,

to remember, sing:

 

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

Comma, quote, dialogue, punctuate, end quote

 

Insert dialogue,

then you punctuate.

Exclamation mark, or period, or question

End with a quote, to remember, sing:

 

Insert dialogue

This is what a character will say, say, say

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Don’t Forget to Edit


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Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

I’ve finished my story, I’m done

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

My story’s all done

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

I’ve finished my story, I’m done

Pump, Pump, Pump it up…

 

Wait, stop!

 

You may want to forget it, 

but you’ve come this far.

It’s time to re-read and edit. 

It’s not even that hard.

 

First things first! 

You’ve got to read your work aloud. (Aloud)

We’re listening for fluency, 

how smooth your story sounds. (Listen up)

 

You might come across a verb whose tense 

does not agree with its noun or pronoun. 

Listen up, carefully; 

 

“Hans be running” sounds funny…

“They is running” ‘s not ok (no way)

It’s so easy to get pumped up 

and overlook small mistakes. (switch it up)

Now, “Hans is running,” or, 

“They are running”, feels good to say aloud

because you’ve properly conjugated 

your verbs with your nouns.

 

CHORUS

 

Listen up! Now editing is all 

about the way your words look. (look at that)

There are a certain set of rules 

for publishing a book.

Mechanics are the name 

for what I’m about to address:

Capitalization, spell check, 

punc-punctuation, 

don’t forget “indent.”

 

Take another really close look 

with your eyes. 

Are there any proper nouns 

you forgot to capitalize..?

 

Alright stop! 

See “doug” with a lower case “d?” 

You better pump, pump, pump, pump it

Upper Case! 

See “Ball” with a capital “B?” 

You better down down down size to a 

lower case. 

 

“mister Lemur” with a lower case “m?” 

You better pump, pump, pump, pump it 

upper case.

Re-read, now check it all again, don’t stop!

 

CHORUS

 

You won’t want to regret it. 

You’ve made a work of art. 

After revisions, let’s edit. 

Need help on where to start?  

 

You should make sure to circle 

any words that might not look correct. 

You can use a dictionary when necessary, 

for meaning and spelling checks. 

At the beginning of paragraphs 

let us not forget to leave some room to indent.

 

We’re almost done editing now…

 

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

My story’s almost done.

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

This editing is… (..is it?)

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

 

My story’s almost done.

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

This editing is kind of fun!

 

Last step: gotta punc-punc-punctuate 

(sing it) (punc-punc-punctuate)

 

Re-read! Better punc-punc-punctuate, 

my periods and commas… 

never know if my writing will be seen 

by President Obama. 

 

Now punctuation also includes parentheses. 

Use them to add something extra, 

put these words in-between.

 

Don’t confuse exclamation 

and question marks. 

One’s for wonders and 

the other one’s for exciting remarks.

 

Lastly, don’t forget 

quotation marks, and then, 

use them when someone is speaking. 

“Time to EDIT,” Jonny said.

 

CHORUS

 

You won’t want to regret it. 

You’ve made a work of art. 

After revisions, let’s edit. 

It’s not even that hard.

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

I’ve finished my story I’m done.

Pump, Pump, Pump it up! 

Wait, stop!

Time to publish.

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